Meh... I got to six pages, then decided I didn't like it. I need to have a central conflict and need to introduce it sooner. So now I restarted it and am stuck after page two. Pages 2-3 are a good point to introduce the central conflict. And... no clue how that's going to happen. I'm thinking maybe Angel can fall apart and Jack can try and help her, but he really doesn't have the capability to do anything. But yeah... Now I'm just feeling bleh and don't want to sit down and figure this out.