Well, I finished rewriting the one part of Stareleon. I may still do some more edits, but I don't think I'll have any more major changes. Anyone want to read it and give me some feedback? It's about 6000 words. It's a children's fantasy short story full of cute heroicness. Mostly wondering if any parts stick out as being off somehow. Also curious what you think of the vocabulary and appropriate age range, if I should change some words to suit younger readers. I think I may have to do some scouting around, looking at children's books and seeing how mine fits in. I don't know that it's long enough to be a chapter book, but it has some higher vocabulary and complexity. I guess I can get a feel for what is out there and what publishers might be good to send to and make some changes if needbe.