I'm not entirely happy with it. Was experimenting with inking style, and I might try using some greyscale washes. Although, ultimately, I'd like it to be in color. The characters also look so tiny shrunken down, so I might try some closeups and different camera angles. Should just do more drawing in general to make the characters look more natural. Although I did get compliments from my classmates. :)
But yeah, this'll be a long way from being published. Still have to work out some rather large plot details and such too. And just composing the first three pages took forever. Imagine doing a whole novel... >_< I think I'll just work on my dark fantasy* novel for now. :) At least that is pretty much all thought through.
*Okay, I was debating whether "dark fantasy" would be the correct genre for my novel. And I've come to the conclusion that what best describes it is "noir fantasy" or something to that effect. It's like a film noir in a medieval fantasy setting. Narrated by my tortured-soul, sociopathic anti-hero in a bleak, existential fashion. ...But really, he's such fun. :)
I shall have to compile all of my notes and snippets of writing and set to work on actually writing the thing. And I think I shall resuscitate Sathiel's livejournal as place to develop and workshop my story if anyone would be so interested in reading such.